Hungry , i eyed a crisp,red apple delicious it looked i bit into it addictive,couldnt stop eatin went on n on n on till a limp,bitter core was left starin at me the apple was no more.
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this is yer best post ever...i just love it...i know u told me that u think the second last one is...bt i find this one much much better...
7 comments:
this is yer best post ever...i just love it...i know u told me that u think the second last one is...bt i find this one much much better...
this is yer best post ever...i just love it...i know u told me that u think the second last one is...bt i find this one much much better...
this one was brilliant
leave me be in this place we call ''home''
i'll burn and toil and try
i know i dont belong in heaven
and your paradise is a lie...
i liked dis...short and too the poem...good job!
-aazar
Paradise is not this 'n this is no paradise. 'Forbidden' is a frame of mind. There are somethings that dont have an expiry date.
ah ha
'the apple was no more'- really nice...
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