he pulled up his tri cycle next to her
she was carrying a basket of plums in her dimpled hands
d breeze pushin strands of silken baby hair across her face
n he produces a flower in fronta her
baby pink ,like her frock
-break-
("...others were not meant to play wid ur heart baby,
step over your feelings , or
trample over u wid their unthoughtfulness.
it will hurt to hear this.
but till how long will you immerse yourself in stories...lies...to comfort yourself .....")
scene2:
the two scramble down a pebbled road
along a slope
flanked with luscious fields along both sides
brimming with honeysuckles n tulips
hand in hand
they ran
screaming with laughter
their voices echoin
-break-
("..tell me girl,is it even worth it
is it worth losin respect fer yourself??...")
her face stained with tears,she scribbled;
cover me up
from head to toe
m naked n cold
doesnt it show?
spread your all encompassin wings
to block my raging tears
fly me to a land where m secure
peaceful comfort serenades my uneventful abode
if structured be i to feel n cringe
get hurt and run away
y did lord god create me at the first place
to hurt myself
to hurt others ..
scene3:
... their bodies enveloped in sweet baby sweat
their faces red and glowing
they stopped
planted themselves on a soft patch on the grass
and lay there
the girl put her head on his lap
n he pulled her up
caressing her..
.
6 comments:
hmmmmmmmmm.......................................
do you mind if i copy this........,i mean fantastic piece of literature i d love to keep it with me newayz dont bother saying no!!!!!!!!!!who cares.........
whooaa! thanks fer callin it fantastic but who d hell r you??!
so its a yes!.....good, n me??? good ques.!!!
There's something that leaves me very uneasy about this piece... its the boy caressing the girl. No... its... I know what it is- its the tulips!
this leaves me with a beautiful sadness of loss. great writing. love it!
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